Recount with a difference

WALT: We are learning to sequence ideas and avoid repetition.

  

Feet to floor, 

arm to draw,

body to clothes(if I can get my foot through the hole)

food to lunch box, 

toothpaste to toothbrush (hoping it does not go on my face)  

water to bottle,

waewae to shoes,

phone to ear,

chrome book to shoulder,

bag to back,

tinana to car(get out of the way dog!)

This is my draft copy

  Do pets deserve the same care as

humans?

Attention Grabber

All animals are living things, just like us.  Did you know there are 70 million stray animals in the U.S. that aren't getting fed or have any homes? How sad is that. 

Introduction 

Hi my name is Aurora. I think all pets deserve proper care. 

The body 

Reason 1

Animals need the best care they deserve. They need the best care so they can live a happy and healthy life. 

My dog was going to get put down because it had a genetic defect which affected his eyes. We chose not to go forward with it and after a lot of help and care my dog got better and better. He is as happy as Larry and he's living a longer happy life. 

The Mad Hatter

The Mad Hatter  - Story Starter

He was a most peculiar looking chap…
Can you write a character description of the Mad Hatter?

He was a most peculiar looking chap with his crispy slug eyebrows , big colorful hat and his  cotton candy hair. When the mad hatter talks he has a deep but  sweet voice oh yes and be careful not to make him mad. When it is tea time you must not be late otherwise your tea will get cold. Tea time is very important to the Mad Hatter. Fragis day is the day that the Mad Hatter does the Fragis dance and he is very good at it you may even say he is the best at it.Watch out for the bunny he likes to throw things and say your late , the cat might steal your hat and the mouse might pick your I out with her sword. Have a good day and don’t be late!